Dude honestly i would pay minimum if i got money rn but im broke. But i give u my word if i had a money i would pay a bit because this is not easy to make and it consume much time. When the time come ill pay, until then i will look forward to your project dude.
So you are worried about this game not being perfect? Folks, once again (and it is not a frequent happening amongst AVNs) I am pleasantly surprise by, in my educated opinion, a very well developed story with truly amazing renderings. Just enough sex to add some spice without it succumbing to pure silly eroticism. This is ART! You actually have a story and some characters the reader/viewer can care about. The dialogue/monologue is smart and often funny, and every character doesn't sound the same - each seems to have their own unique voice. I think I saw one spelling or grammar error in passing, but it was such a non-issue that I literally can't remember where I saw it.
Yup, this one will get support from me, and I will remain impatiently waiting for the next Chapters. This is one of those gems that I almost want to wait until you say it is done before I engage with it again...but I don't have that kind of patience. Just get us more so we can continue being massively entertained. Cheers to you!
We really appreciate the support, and the kind words keep us excited to make more Chapters! We have a lot of great content coming, and we can't wait for you to play! Keep being awesome!
Amazing experience so far! i pray you will keep this project going! we need more great vn like this, excited to see your future updates, will definately be happy to buy on steam if that becomes reality, or support patreon in the future. keep working hard!
Yup, this should totally be on Steam. One of the top 5 AVNs. But I would rather see it on Steam once it is completed. This is a good forum for it while it is being built.
I'm digging this project so far. The oft oddball humor has me cracking up at points (especially with Rylee). The overall look and cleanliness of the graphic choice is nice and crisp. The storyline has me wanting more.
If I have any issue, it is the text size and location, even after adjustment. I play on the Android version, and, on a phone screen, the text is so tiny that I have to bump it up to at least 60 in the preferences to be able to read comfortably. Problem is, when you size the text up, half of the dialog is lost beyond the bottom screen edge. On a larger screen tablet, this isn't a big deal, but on a phone screen - ugh.
Still, I'm digging what you guys are making so far.
Is MC going to be homophobic the entire time? Because I'm bisexual and MC making snide comments about same sex attraction and sex is really pissing me off. Being rude and standoffish to be a dick is one thing, homophobia etc is completely
Which jokes? We have had hundreds of thousands play the game, and no one, not one, has made any mention of this because we do not specifically write these jokes into our game. The MC has mentioned he is striaght, but that's about it. You find us 3 examples.
Also, this is a story of redemption. The MC is going to be a dick for a few chapters. It's a story and it needs an arc, and the player decides which redemption he has.
I didn't say they were jokes. The time MC tells the super friendly guy that he's fine with his sexuality felt a bit hostile. The time MC walks in on the porn shoot, his comments still felt a little judgy despite him saying he wasn't judging. It's possible these things weren't as hostile as I read them, but considering how much of a dick MC is to everyone about everything, it's not hard to read them that way.
As for your hundreds of thousands of people playing the game, the vast majority of them are probably straight guys, so chances are unless it was blatant homophobia the majority of them wouldn't notice it, and even then how many would care to mention it?
In defense of of the dialog with super friendly dude:
As a straight dude with a few non-straight friends, it seems that ANY time a straight guy has to point out his straightness to someone who is gay or bi always comes across harshly, whether he intends to be a dick or not. It's a simple way of saying "not interested," and anyone hoping there COULD be some interest is going to take that harsh - regardless of sexuality.
If super friendly dude came across to be interested in the MC, as it DID kinda seem, at first, almost any straight guy out there would have said SOMETHING to squash the idea of a hook up right away, so as to not lead super friendly dude on. Would it be harsh? Not in intent, but most likely in reception.
We're happy you enjoy it! We've put extra time into making the story something that you won't find in any other VN, and we want to keep that humor in the story as we continue.
Great game so far.. Love the Characters.. especially the Doctor and crazy freckle girl. The lack of coffee scene was amazing. I'd be purposely waking her up early and hiding the coffee everyday, it was adorable.
I understand why everything is unlocked now. It's because it has the walkthrough and cheats installed directly into it. I apologise for the confusion and I like the way you did the game. I am enjoying it so far as well.
I just have one simple question reguardin my screen cap as shown below ! was this a BODY error or is one of the school staff a he-she or she-he ??? and feedback am LOVING the work and i think it more than fair to say you got me HUCKED from the very painful start *( pun intended )* lol, LMAO to the end i read it all at once in one go and i have placed it in my personal top 10 read V.N.'s and i have only started reading V.N.'s when *( COVID 19)* hit the UK and i have read well over at least 500 ODD stories !!!
Thank you for the feedback and we're glad you're enjoying the game! If you have any feedback, please use our Discord, it's easier for us to read. Thanks!
I have some useful feedback for you to help improve this V.N. even more so far i am loving, the first 1 is when the MC goes out on the boat and end up going in the sea and as you should know water and electrical item have a shocking time in water, but i found wield is you never use that before he gets on the boat and is the brace water proof because in the story so far it ends up in the sea *( TWICE )* once thanks to the whale and second is when *( stormy )* drops you of at night, but the other i found so funny is the use of " MAGIC ethernet ports" as in the screen caps below. thanks keep up the great work on this V.N. Chapter 2 v0.2.1 cant wait to see where it goes and the next Chapter 3.
We're happy you enjoyed it! Yes, somehow we launched the version that we hadn't edited. The typos were few and far between, so we decided to just keep this distribution until the next update.
And we are doing something about the body hair in the next chapter 😃
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Dude honestly i would pay minimum if i got money rn but im broke. But i give u my word if i had a money i would pay a bit because this is not easy to make and it consume much time. When the time come ill pay, until then i will look forward to your project dude.
So you are worried about this game not being perfect? Folks, once again (and it is not a frequent happening amongst AVNs) I am pleasantly surprise by, in my educated opinion, a very well developed story with truly amazing renderings. Just enough sex to add some spice without it succumbing to pure silly eroticism. This is ART! You actually have a story and some characters the reader/viewer can care about. The dialogue/monologue is smart and often funny, and every character doesn't sound the same - each seems to have their own unique voice. I think I saw one spelling or grammar error in passing, but it was such a non-issue that I literally can't remember where I saw it.
Yup, this one will get support from me, and I will remain impatiently waiting for the next Chapters. This is one of those gems that I almost want to wait until you say it is done before I engage with it again...but I don't have that kind of patience. Just get us more so we can continue being massively entertained. Cheers to you!
We really appreciate the support, and the kind words keep us excited to make more Chapters! We have a lot of great content coming, and we can't wait for you to play! Keep being awesome!
Amazing experience so far! i pray you will keep this project going! we need more great vn like this, excited to see your future updates, will definately be happy to buy on steam if that becomes reality, or support patreon in the future. keep working hard!
Yup, this should totally be on Steam. One of the top 5 AVNs. But I would rather see it on Steam once it is completed. This is a good forum for it while it is being built.
I'm digging this project so far. The oft oddball humor has me cracking up at points (especially with Rylee). The overall look and cleanliness of the graphic choice is nice and crisp. The storyline has me wanting more.
If I have any issue, it is the text size and location, even after adjustment. I play on the Android version, and, on a phone screen, the text is so tiny that I have to bump it up to at least 60 in the preferences to be able to read comfortably. Problem is, when you size the text up, half of the dialog is lost beyond the bottom screen edge. On a larger screen tablet, this isn't a big deal, but on a phone screen - ugh.
Still, I'm digging what you guys are making so far.
Is MC going to be homophobic the entire time? Because I'm bisexual and MC making snide comments about same sex attraction and sex is really pissing me off. Being rude and standoffish to be a dick is one thing, homophobia etc is completely
Which jokes? We have had hundreds of thousands play the game, and no one, not one, has made any mention of this because we do not specifically write these jokes into our game. The MC has mentioned he is striaght, but that's about it. You find us 3 examples.
Also, this is a story of redemption. The MC is going to be a dick for a few chapters. It's a story and it needs an arc, and the player decides which redemption he has.
I didn't say they were jokes. The time MC tells the super friendly guy that he's fine with his sexuality felt a bit hostile. The time MC walks in on the porn shoot, his comments still felt a little judgy despite him saying he wasn't judging. It's possible these things weren't as hostile as I read them, but considering how much of a dick MC is to everyone about everything, it's not hard to read them that way.
As for your hundreds of thousands of people playing the game, the vast majority of them are probably straight guys, so chances are unless it was blatant homophobia the majority of them wouldn't notice it, and even then how many would care to mention it?
In defense of of the dialog with super friendly dude:
As a straight dude with a few non-straight friends, it seems that ANY time a straight guy has to point out his straightness to someone who is gay or bi always comes across harshly, whether he intends to be a dick or not. It's a simple way of saying "not interested," and anyone hoping there COULD be some interest is going to take that harsh - regardless of sexuality.
If super friendly dude came across to be interested in the MC, as it DID kinda seem, at first, almost any straight guy out there would have said SOMETHING to squash the idea of a hook up right away, so as to not lead super friendly dude on. Would it be harsh? Not in intent, but most likely in reception.
go cry about it on twitter..
Good game with a nice story and humor. I can definitely recommend it 5/5!
We're happy you enjoy it! We've put extra time into making the story something that you won't find in any other VN, and we want to keep that humor in the story as we continue.
Great game and great jokes
10/10
Great game so far.. Love the Characters.. especially the Doctor and crazy freckle girl. The lack of coffee scene was amazing. I'd be purposely waking her up early and hiding the coffee everyday, it was adorable.
Layla is a great character! We are especially happy with how she and Rylee developed as characters in the game!
Keep doing what you are doing, I can't wait for more..
Layla is my favorite! Love Rylee too and in some weird way Stormy too, lol!
What's the point in actually finding the otter hunts when they are already unlocked from the beginning? Might want to fix that.
They should be... hmmm
I'm not sure about the other platforms but for android the otter hunts and the replay gallery is unlocked.
I understand why everything is unlocked now. It's because it has the walkthrough and cheats installed directly into it. I apologise for the confusion and I like the way you did the game. I am enjoying it so far as well.
I just have one simple question reguardin my screen cap as shown below ! was this a BODY error or is one of the school staff a he-she or she-he ??? and feedback am LOVING the work and i think it more than fair to say you got me HUCKED from the very painful start *( pun intended )* lol, LMAO to the end i read it all at once in one go and i have placed it in my personal top 10 read V.N.'s and i have only started reading V.N.'s when *( COVID 19)* hit the UK and i have read well over at least 500 ODD stories !!!
Thank you for the feedback and we're glad you're enjoying the game! If you have any feedback, please use our Discord, it's easier for us to read. Thanks!
I have some useful feedback for you to help improve this V.N. even more so far i am loving, the first 1 is when the MC goes out on the boat and end up going in the sea and as you should know water and electrical item have a shocking time in water, but i found wield is you never use that before he gets on the boat and is the brace water proof because in the story so far it ends up in the sea *( TWICE )* once thanks to the whale and second is when *( stormy )* drops you of at night, but the other i found so funny is the use of " MAGIC ethernet ports" as in the screen caps below. thanks keep up the great work on this V.N. Chapter 2 v0.2.1 cant wait to see where it goes and the next Chapter 3.
This game is fantastic!
I randomly found this game and I am glad I did. The story is great and the characters are interesting. I can't wait for more.
We're going to have more coming in the next few months!
I really enjoy this. I cant wait to see what the future holds for it.
If I may ask, will pregnancy be an option in the future?
No Android no more?
We are working on getting a better version of it!
I was wondering cuz I forgot name this game/can and was glad I refound it
Loved it! Just the right type of humor and good story telling. Some typo's here and there, however, it does not detract from the story.
The MC's arm hair is kind of funny looking though :D
Can't wait for future chapters!
We're happy you enjoyed it! Yes, somehow we launched the version that we hadn't edited. The typos were few and far between, so we decided to just keep this distribution until the next update.
And we are doing something about the body hair in the next chapter 😃
Thanks for playing!
Discord link not working keeps saying invite invalid
Also is chapter 1 included in the new update?
Yes, it includes all previous content! We're looking at the Discord link now.
perfect its working now and thank you for the speedy reply just busy downloading game now to try it :D
Is it good? I want to know before I download it
It has astronomical potential can not wait till the next update
Keep up the good work B.O.G :D